The Speed of a Flame

I am working on the text editing of 'The Speed of a Flame', the second/third book in the Livonia series. It presents fewer problems than ,Survival' as it is a single book of normal length of about 300 pages. as opposed to 'Survival' which combines 'Walpurgis Night' and 'The Last Star Rising' . Enough to say that Bernadette's and Tamara's peaceful life turns out to have more problems than they expected.